SCENE 1: Going Out
LOCATION - {PREPARES HERSELF - IN A RELIGIOUS HOUSE}
Girl: *Rummaging through her mothers handbag and takes the money and checks her cigarettes*
--Wide Shot of Girl--
--Shot close up of what she’s putting in--
--Medium shot of the door--
Girl: *Tries to rush out of the door*
Dad/Mum/Brother: Do you want me to
drop you off to college?
Girl: *comes back and leans over
the door frame* Nononono I’m fine!
(in frustration)
Dad/Mum/Bother: Oh, okay, good luck...
Girl: *Leaves without replying or before she’s finished*
(Cut away shot)
Girl: *Walks out of the estate, moves to a corner
and starts to change by taking off her headscarf*
*Leaves to go college she changes into her real casual outfit - taking off her headscarf first*
(Pan right from girl to corner to stalker cam then pan from corner to completely out of site)
{TRANSITION: MASKED PAN TRANSITION TO GIRL IN THE PARK}
SCENE 2:
LOCATION - ON A PARK ON BENCH, W2 ST MARY'S PATHWAY
--Establishing shot from the rails--
--Shot: over the shoulder pan left to right--
Girl: where are you? (arrogantly)
Boy: I'm on my way don't worry
babe. (acting calm)
--Medium close up from the front--
Girl: this is taking the piss!
Boy: Don't worry don't worry
(sharply) I'll be there in 5
minutes.
--Right Side close up--
Girl: Why is it taking so much
time, I swear you live down the
road?
Boy: Yeah , but I had to deal
something, innit (trying to smooth
it out)
Girl: [Talks into the phone] You
always do this!
Boy: okay, chill I’ll be there in
a bit.
Girl: just hurry up and get the
stuff.
--Close Up Shot--
Girl: [Cuts off the phone with the Boyfriend]
--Medium Shot Right Side--
Girl: [Facial expression changes and tone]
[Gets called from an anonymous person]
--Close up of phone--
--Medium right side--
Girl: *Answers the Phone*
Anonymous Person: [talking low, almost whispering to the anonymous caller]
--TRANSITION: FADE OUT--
SCENE 3 - The Meet Up
LOCATION: {STREET ACROSS FROM THE PADDINGTION
LOCATION: {STREET ACROSS FROM THE PADDINGTION
GREEN CAR PARK}
Girl and Boy: [walking towards each other]
--Following over the shoulder--
Girl: Well you finally made it, to
see your Girlfriend
(Sarcastically).. So you got the
stuff yet? [both stop facing each
other]
--Medium Shot --
Boy: Nah, not yet [Looks around]
--Close up--
Girl: One of these days I swear!
You told me you already got some!
--Medium Shot--
Boy: yeah yeah, the man should be
here soon innit. I told you don't
worry about it(continues to look
around
--(Boy Over the shoulder) to (slow right rotation ) --
Girl: Better be here soon (Arrogantly)
Hooded figure: [Walks into frame] Yo fam!
--Pan comes to a halt to hooded figure calls his name to and start
to talk then go to the corner--
Hooded figure: [Walks into frame] Yo fam!
Boy and Girl: [They both look at him]
Boy: See I told you he would be
here soon.(Enthusiastically)
--Medium wide of the two from the front--
Girl: Oh Finally!
--Close up fast panning on each line--
Boy: Mind lending me £5 (casually)
Girl: Are you being
serious....*stands with a posture*
Boy: [the boy remains Silence and
just looks at her in an uncaring
way]
Girl: One of these days! *Hands
him the money*
--Wide Shot from across the street--
Boy: *Walks across the Road*
--Follow wide shot of the boy and hooded figure walking into
the car park, Shot of girl following them from across the
street--
[she sees him run up to the hooded figure, talks then walk
behind the bend of the car park]
-
GIRL: [SHE COMES TO A STOPS ]
--Medium close up--
--Shot of Car Park panel--
[the hearing of some commotion and loud voices]
{SFX/Recorded yells and commotion rising - Till one big
{SFX/Recorded yells and commotion rising - Till one big
yelp}
-- Medium Shot of girl standing with confused face --
[now dead silence, she realised that he
had been killed and all that is left is a horrifying pitch]
{Audio Edit of pich repeating}
--Wide shot of car park opening--
Girl: [Sees the figure walk out of the car park shoving something
within his pocket and walking away]
--Extreme Close up with slight tilted--
Girl: [She Realised what’s just happened, and in the shock she
remind frozen]
{Effects: slow motion extreme close up + pitch
sound comes to a peak and cuts}
--TRANSITION: QUICK CUT TO BLACK--
SCENE 4 -
Location - The Paddington Green underpass
--Wide shot of her running towards inside the tunnel--
Girl:[She is now mentally alone, brain struck
because of the realisation of what she had done, killing her boyfriend]
Girl: [She bursts out of the corner and slides to the ground in
shock to curl up emotionally]
--Medium close up of her crouched--
Girl: [Running into the underpass out of breath, slightly
emotional still in shock and rests on a wall. she gets a
phone call.]
Girl: [She calms down and answers the phone]
--Extreme close up of face--
Girl: "where do I collect my
money?"
TRANSITION: INSTANT TO BLACK
--CREDITS ROLE THE TITLE OF 'MONEY'--
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